Only by touching yourself can you infect readers

My wife and I finished our eight-day tour of Shennongjia and Enshi on June 22 and returned to our home in Shanghai at 11 o 'clock that night. Although people come back, but still quiet in the heart of the beauty, the warmth of the moved inside can not extricate themselves. On the morning of the 23rd, after washing and breakfast, I sat down at the computer desk in a hurry, brewing ideas and preparing to write travel notes.

The first is to sort out the writing materials. We usually have the habit of sharing information and happiness with friends and relatives on the night of the tour. It is also the first-hand information for me to write travel notes. Then determine the theme, draft the outline, and enter the writing process. Generally speaking, similar writing takes three to four days at the earliest, from conception to writing, checking and revising, and finalizing. However, this nearly 3000-word documentary essay,"A True Paradise on Earth," took only one day and one night to close the pen and publish.

During this period, the work efficiency is highest on the evening of the 23rd. I am full of passion, a burst of effort to fight all night, through the writing of all procedures, after strict review by the website to pass, 24 morning literary websites published my article, the speed of the fast let oneself also surprised! Some people may ask whether writing done in a hurry will appear sloppy and crude. However, from the feedback information, this article is still relatively successful writing.

What is particularly gratifying is that the click rate of readers reading on the same day of Shu Yun Literature Network exceeded one thousand times;"Reading Wen,""Chinese Prose Network,""Article Reading Network" and so on also left teachers, literary friends enthusiastic praise and evaluation. American Reading Appreciation

Teacher Li Xiangjiu's comment: This trip is worthwhile. It seemed to bring me into such a wonderful and strange wonderland that I wanted to go to. Teacher Li Dongzi's comments: The author's writing is exquisite, vivid and detailed, so that readers can feast their eyes with the text. I was particularly moved by the comments of an editor and teacher with the pen name Southwest Yiweng. He said: Brother Xie's article is a clear stream for us! All Liang soul teacher emotion: beautiful road journey, cut a beautiful memory sealed dust in the bottom of my heart! I am thrilled and grateful for similar reviews.

To be honest, my article is very ordinary in terms of technique. After all, I am not a Chinese major. I am afraid there are some mistakes in some expressions. The reason why I can win readers like, I think the biggest experience and feeling is: travel deeply touched me. Moved will have motivation, there is spirit, naturally will also be a spring of ideas. Only by touching yourself can you infect readers.

The article starts with the beautiful scenery of Enshi praised at home and abroad as heaven on earth, so that readers can travel with us and gradually uncover the mysterious veil of fairyland on earth. This trip not only let us feast our eyes, but also felt the unforgettable baptism and shock of the soul. This kind of happy experience of blending feelings and scenes interprets the rich connotation of fairyland on earth and sublimates the wonderful artistic conception of the article.

As for why an ordinary trip would move me so much, anyone who has insulted me in this article will certainly have some insight. In order to facilitate the analysis and understanding of the article, I sorted out my own context of the article. The following points can be summarized:

1. Moved by the beauty of the mountains and waters of the motherland. Shennongjia primeval forest towering mystery, a large number of rare wild animals and plants protected strange, everything, let us eye-opener; the charming scenery of the Great Nine Lakes, the grand canyon steep, Qingjiang River gorgeous beauty. All of them are fascinating and unforgettable.

2. Moved by the magnificent century project. Visit the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River in person and feel the magic pen of China's water conservancy project. It is magnificent, magnificent and boiling; especially when you experience the scene of ship lock closing and instant rising on cruise ship, you can see tourists excited and cheering, and pride still arises in your heart. A similar touch: to see and appreciate the world's highest bridges, waterways, countless tunnels, bridges, overhead cables and other human miracles created by the Chinese people.

3. Moved by the positive and optimistic attitude of elderly tourists. Although everyone comes from different regions and cities, they quickly integrate into a big family. Respect and love each other, help and care for each other, and feel the friendship and warmth of the world. Especially from every old man's laughter, humor and wit, from their singing, folk art and dance, I feel the incomparable happiness and satisfaction of their life.

As a recruit in the team of writers, this kind of touch is especially precious. It makes me realize the ancient sages: read thousands of books, travel thousands of miles of profound truth. The wise man should not only read widely, but also go to nature and integrate into life. Only by experiencing more and having a wide range of knowledge can he rise from perceptual knowledge to rational knowledge, enrich his experience and cultivate his sentiment. Only in this way can his literary works be inspired, have substance and have the spirituality of heaven and earth, thus radiating infinite vitality.

July 1, 2019 in Shanghai